reaper13 Posted December 19, 2008 Share Posted December 19, 2008 to keep myself busy i've started a whole new story. this does NOT take place in oblivion. it takes place on earth. it's a more modern story. the story will start in the middle and flashbacks, dreams and nightmare will show you what happened in the past. wildfire and shade are still the main people but some things about them have been changed. this story shows how i saw them normaly. i had to change some thing to fit into the world of oblivion. lastly this is going to be a more....brutal story. if you don't like bloody battles DO NOT READ!!! before i forget i will be posting pictures of wildfire guns he calls 'the heartbreaker" ASAP on to the new story. enter the inferno.... "come on man time to get up!” a voice said through the closed door. “ five more minutes” a half-conscious wildfire said into his pillow. “ come on you need to get out of bed” the voice in his head told him. Brushing the blood red hair from his eyes he managed to get out of bed without falling over. He got dressed in his usual black shirt, black pants and black combat boots. He grabbed his red trench coat, noticing it didn’t want to move.” looks like the scales need to be oiled again” if you didn’t know about the armored scales inside the fabric you would never have know that the trench coat was bulletproof. Finally he opened the secret compartment and took out his two pistols. On the grips of both guns was a flaming heart broken in two. He reached for the gun that was normally hanging in the back but grabbed nothing but air. “Oh yeah, the grenade launcher” he reminded himself. He closed the closet and left the room. “Another boring day” he complained on his way to the armory. Opening the door he saw a man behind the desk cleaning a small revolver. Wildfire smiled, he couldn’t resist. He walked quietly up to the man and then….”JOHNSON!” The man fell backwards in the chair.” damn it wildfire don’t do that!” “Sorry. Did you fix the HK?” “Yes there was something in the grenade launcher that was blocking the firing pin from moving.” “What was it?” “Ash” “Sorry.” “ You need to be careful with this. I also fixed the sights as well as cleaned it.” Wildfire just smiled. “what would I do without you?” Johnson just rolled his eyes. “ you’d have a gun blow up in your face.” “Very funny. I’m going to try this out right now. See you later” before Johnson could say anything he was out the door. At the firing range “Oh no not him again” Adam thought when he saw wildfire. “Um wildfire. I can’t let you use the heartbreakers again. Last time you shot the firing range to pieces . You’re not firing those guns in here again!” “ Not today Adam. Just trying out the 416 again. Johnson did some work on it.” “Oh…sorry. What kind of targets do you want?.” “…Human size metal targets with heavy body armor.” “Wow. You sure it can hit them?” “Just get the dummy ready!” Adam hit one of many buttons on the wall and a target popped up in the firing range. Wildfire raised his rifle and emptied his whole 30 round clip into the dummy. It was shredded.” get another one ready!”. A second dummy popped up. Wildfire reloaded and fired a second clip into the target. This time there was only one hole in the target, right in between the eyes. Suddenly the intercom crackled to life. “ Attention attention all combat personal. A possible high value target has been sighted nearby. Wildfire I know your listening. Assemble your team and take it out.” Wildfire was out the door before the last shell hit the floor. At the assembly area. Wildfire opened the door and saw around 30 men getting ready. Looking at the faces he saw some that he didn’t recognize.” why are there…oh the grenade….so these are my replacements” he thought. He walked over to his locker and took out his knife. “I’m sick of doing this” he though as he cut his finger. He wiped the blood on the scanner witch unlocked the locker when it figured out who’s blood it was. He reached in his locker and took out some clips for his favorite rifle: the H&K 416. He also grabbed a grenade but then put it back. “ I don’t want to scare the new guys.” as the team finished getting ready 3 striker APCs pulled up to bring them into the city. “I hate New York.” Wildfire thought “way too many people.” Wildfire ordered the new recruits onto one APC ant the veterans onto the other ones. Wildfire than climbed into the first one to talk with the new guys. Wildfire took his seat at the front of the APC and was about to talk to the soldiers when a voice said “your late.” he turned around to see the gunner climbing down from the turret. “ Sorry Shade I was in the firing range.” he said as the woman came over and sat by him. “Everyone this is shade, my second in command. You will listen to BOTH of us understand.” “YES SIR” Then one man spoke up.” your shade?” “you sound surprised” “I’ve herd rumors about you” “Like what?” “That your…not human” She smiled at him and his face grew white….she had fangs. “ they aren’t rumors at all….that’s the truth” Wildfire smiled. He know what was coming. “everyone cover your eyes or go blind!” Everyone covered their eyes and shade lit up in a bright purple light. When the light died down. Everyone opened their eyes and wildfire plugged his ears. Everyone started yelling. Sitting next to wildfire was a demon. Everyone just stared at her. Shade just glared at the group “what? Haven’t you ever seen a succubus before?” Wildfire laughed. “don’t worry your not the ones she’s going to hurt.” “We’ve arrived” the driver said. “finally. Time for some fun” wildfire thought as the door opened…. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reaper13 Posted December 19, 2008 Author Share Posted December 19, 2008 first of all sorry for the double post. these are the heartbreakers. the pictures are from garry's mod. i did NOT make the guns. http://i723.photobucket.com/albums/ww232/mortul1991/hl22008-12-1910-33-42-40.jpg http://i723.photobucket.com/albums/ww232/mortul1991/hl22008-12-1910-33-25-37.jpg also the shots are custom http://i723.photobucket.com/albums/ww232/mortul1991/hl22008-12-1910-33-44-42.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted December 21, 2008 Share Posted December 21, 2008 I like it,but the character names sound very familiar :whistling: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pedantic Posted December 21, 2008 Share Posted December 21, 2008 Nice one. There's a few literary annoyances which I'm not going to illustrate because you are continually getting better at this writing thing .... Keep with it Reaper13 and don't keep us waiting for the next part for too long eh! :biggrin: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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