Gamerbird Posted December 22, 2008 Share Posted December 22, 2008 Chapter 1 - WrathWrath, the immense or uncontrolled feeling of anger or hatred. These feelings can be caused by denial of the truth, both to others and in the form of self-denial. Impatience with the procedure of the law with desire to seek revenge outside the workings of the justice system and generally wishing to do evil or harmful things to others. Those born to cause the sin of wrath are those who become murderers, terrorists and those of extreme sin cause genocide.In its original form, wrath was directed internally rather than externally, making suicide the ultimate, albeit tragic, expression of wrath directed inwardly, the final rejection of Gods gift of life. Once the sin of wrath is taken and you have not repenteted, your final punishment in hell is you being dismembered alive.Symbols of Wrath include the colour red and bears. This story tales the tale of one man, taken by the government under a new scheme, to put a stop to the seven sins, to save humanity from its imminent end.It takes place in the small town of Shendo, a place of peace and serenity.Although not all are seen in the eyes of the town.One man, one sin, one punishment. In the quiet town of Shendo, there was one man who lived with his wife, whom he had been married to for 7 years now and his daughter, 6 years old.His family seemed that of any normal family, he had a well paid corporate job, his wife stayed at home with a part-time job also and his daughter now in full-time education.They went on holidays together, went out to the local park and generally seemed like a happy family.However, a lot was kept from public eye, events that took place without the publics attention..... You wouldn't think he was the type to do such a thing, his family always seemed happy together, never anything wrong.Although every person has the potential to become a monster, no matter how happy and content with their life they are..... -------------- This is a preview of my upcoming story 'Seven Sins - Wrath'.So please take in to consideration this is still being worked on and many things will be changed and added.It is going to be one in seven stories, one for each of the sins.If you have any suggestions or comments, please post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alex2avs Posted December 22, 2008 Share Posted December 22, 2008 That's all ? *sob* it was great,and interesting.Well done ,Aaron.I'm waiting for the future parts of the story.:thanks: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gamerbird Posted December 22, 2008 Author Share Posted December 22, 2008 Thanks Alex :) I am going to add more to it soon.I am going to add chapter 2, then you will have to wait for the full thing ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted December 22, 2008 Share Posted December 22, 2008 I'm very pleased with how your turning out great stories.You have a natural talent,hopefully you'll pursue it . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gamerbird Posted December 22, 2008 Author Share Posted December 22, 2008 I was thinking of finding someone to reciew my stories.Not sure who though, someone who might get them recognized.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
josh900 Posted December 22, 2008 Share Posted December 22, 2008 i thought you said you weren't going to write the seven sins.looks like it'll be good btw. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gamerbird Posted December 22, 2008 Author Share Posted December 22, 2008 I decided to, had no other ideas and this came to me. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gamerbird Posted December 22, 2008 Author Share Posted December 22, 2008 Chapter 2 – The ExperimentIt had been over a month since it was started.The Government said it was a tool to stop the constant sin caused by the country, a way to stop the downfall of mankind. They took anyone reported of a sin to a building on the outskirts of London, to punish them for their sin, to make them see the light. It was only an experimental tool by the Government but so far it seemed to work.You would think to yourself if they would come and find you for the petty sins you had committed, you would worry yourself about them watching you, not letting you go.However, there were those arrogant who believe they will never be found, those such as the subject of this tale, the man from Shendo.... It was a peaceful day in the town of Shendo, no clouds across the sky, wildlife running among the tress that surrounded the town, no crime and no violence.Until they arrived, the men in the jeep. Everyone ran instantly to their houses. Everyone knew who they were.They watched as terror gripped us all.They approached the house near the post office. One of the four men stepped forward knocking on the door.Before anyone could even answer, he kicked the door down. After 5 minutes of the men being in the house, they dragged a short, dark haired man out of the house.They pulled him towards the jeep and threw him in the back.This is where the tale begins.... --------------------------------------This is the last part of the story you will get until the full thing.So what do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
josh900 Posted December 22, 2008 Share Posted December 22, 2008 hmm.sounds interesting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alex2avs Posted December 23, 2008 Share Posted December 23, 2008 Can't wait for the rest of it . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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