alex2avs Posted January 23, 2009 Share Posted January 23, 2009 It wasn't as scarier as the other one (4) (or I'm wasn't affected since I'm quite tired :biggrin: ) but it was ok ;). Waiting for the next chapter as usual . Keep up the good/evil work ! Alex Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gamerbird Posted March 12, 2009 Author Share Posted March 12, 2009 Well I am now back to my twisted ways :DI finally bring you, the next chapter!It has been a while since I wrote something so I hope this is as good as the rest! I will give warning though, this chapter is messed up mentally.Seriously, please do not hassle me if you find this so messed up it makes you sick :blink: Feedback is appreciated greatly. Chapter 6 – Tears Kept awake throughout the night from the pain, he wept.The tears were of blood, no water left within his body.The cries of others echoed throughout the halls along with oncoming footsteps.As his cell door opened, he tried to bring himself to get to his feet. Before he could climb to his feet, he was dragged down the corridor.He was placed before a door with bloody handprints covering it.Muffled cries could be heard from inside.The guards slowly opened the door, revealing the horrors inside. A women and a child were lay down, on a table.As the bags were removed from their faces, it was all revealed.The women and child were his family, lay there in front of him.As he glanced towards them, he gained the look of fear in his eyes. Surrounding there feeble bodies, were large holes in the table.As he stood there trembling, he was pushed in to a seat, and strapped down.Out of the shadows came the same women, the women who had caused him hell.She walked over towards the table and looked down at his wife. The women let out a smirk as she slapped his wife around the face.As this happened, she pressed a hidden button beneath the table.Nothing happened. The man looked onwards at his wife who was struggling. Suddenly, her movement stopped as sharp blades pierced through her and the child’s body.Killing them both in an instant, the man from Shendo sank in to depression.He now had nothing to live for on the outside world.His world crumbled around him, no light left in his heart.He wept for his lost family, this time, they were real tears. As the guards loosened his restraints, he lunged for them.As one of the guards grabbed the back of his head, they slammed his face up against the wall, knocking him unconscious.He no longer posed a threat to them in his broken state. They dragged him back to his cell, not caring for the blood now trailing from his body.As they threw him back in to his cell, they laughed at his pain.It was quite clear now; this was no cleansing of the world.This was just a reason give by the government to hurt people they wanted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.