dezdimona Posted December 29, 2008 Share Posted December 29, 2008 I sit and ponderthe paths I choose,Was I destinedfor my life tobe so? I seek but cannot find,and so I retreatto the recessesof my mind. I am safe inhere,from the horrorand thedread,but still comes the reaper,acalling to the dead With nails paintedall in black,my lips the deepestblood red,are these thingsreality,or just a fantasyin my head? The tear itmoves so slowlydown my cheek,but do in my little world,I really need toweep? The knife it kills so slowly,the needle does soas well,Am I destined to be Satansbride,to rule their souls,in my ownhell? Black are thehearts,that seek mydemise,full of loathingfor me, theydespise But a gleamdoes show deepdown below,I'll reign overpitiful souls and torment themfor an eternityas well! ang maunawaang lubos ng akin hantungan tawagin sa akin puso at akin kaluluwa. kapangyarihan ng karimlan lagos kanya ugat umagos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pedantic Posted December 30, 2008 Share Posted December 30, 2008 Heavy, heavy, heavy. I think I'd like to give you an e-hug Dezzi. :unsure: HUGZ! Ang ganitong mga maitim na mga saloobin. Ikaw ay hindi nag-iisa, o ligtas, sa loob ng iyong ulo. Pindutin ng matagal sa sa iyong mga kaibigan, sila nag-iisa ay ang iyong kaligtasan. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alex2avs Posted December 30, 2008 Share Posted December 30, 2008 Very dark, Dezi ,very Dark.what's the meaning of the title ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted December 30, 2008 Author Share Posted December 30, 2008 Heavy, heavy, heavy. I think I'd like to give you an e-hug Dezzi. :unsure: HUGZ! Ang ganitong mga maitim na mga saloobin. Ikaw ay hindi nag-iisa, o ligtas, sa loob ng iyong ulo. Pindutin ng matagal sa sa iyong mga kaibigan, sila nag-iisa ay ang iyong kaligtasan.http://bestsmileys.com/hugging/4.gif Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GenDonuts Posted January 28, 2009 Share Posted January 28, 2009 You just keep on impressing me dezi. All of your stuff is great! :banana: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted January 28, 2009 Author Share Posted January 28, 2009 thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaosals42 Posted January 28, 2009 Share Posted January 28, 2009 Good work, Dezi. It's a really dark, touching poem. :thumbsup: Leaves me wondering what were to happen next, who's to suffer next. Nice one! :biggrin: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted January 28, 2009 Author Share Posted January 28, 2009 Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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