Robert55
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:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: Smoother, easier to read
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:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: A consistent story if not a bit wordy
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:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: Tale of men and gods.
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:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: Story flows better .
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:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: a little complicated and confusing at times.
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:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: wordy, a bit to much description other wise OK.
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:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: Good start as long as you do not over complicate?
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:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: Slightly over whelming. Too many factions too much information.
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:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: Going well, a little complicated
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:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: still a little complex action is good
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A little to much detail , otherwise OK :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
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:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: So far so good
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Can any one make some robots or adroids to serve in shops or in stalls to free up settelers for better use eg. armor shop?
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:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: Still good but needs editing a little over complicated?
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:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: a good start
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:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: Maybe too many demi and sub vaults confusing in places over all good work.
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:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: Still good a little complicated, a lot of itemising
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:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: Goin well, do not over complicate and the story should be good!
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:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: Good start, keep going the same way!
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:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: Story is OK but a little confusing in places . Plot coould be more focused , afew les fringe groups.
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:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: Still good but starting to get messy ,comlicated becarfull not to add to many stands before tying some of them up!
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:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: well focused, plot is alittle confusing but should work out if you are carefull noy to add to many threads.
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:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: Lists? Going well but could easily become comlicated