Pronam Posted September 4, 2009 Share Posted September 4, 2009 Rule #1 with texts. Read it to yourself at the end when you're done. So you're sure that is says what it says..As After a 1 hour a sky went full dark, red, no more starts doesn't show any red lines. But when you review or read it you know you meant something else :)..Do you want to change it one more time or, should some english-bstrd with grammar skills do it ;D. (I'm not included.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crimson Knight Posted September 4, 2009 Share Posted September 4, 2009 Okay kvatch destruction was much better and a gripping tale compared to it's predecessor. Kudos to that!!!!!!! great job. Counts ring?????um player character takes from count in game. other than that little thing it was really good. I read it three times :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crimson Knight Posted September 4, 2009 Share Posted September 4, 2009 ahhh ha i didn't catch that till now ha :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pronam Posted September 4, 2009 Share Posted September 4, 2009 Hm, the story isn't that long. I can fix the things I know of..anyone else may do the rest...My skills don't lie in grammar ;D. I'm not sure where to put yours Crimson.. but the story is good, where do you think it should be put?In a book, or perhaps on a scroll in Martin's chambers?---HA! I know where dragon23000 is originated from now .. (Or where he got his Word from ;D)--Ow and I'll not add anything this time ;). I'll just change the lines or will smoothen them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slawter500 Posted September 4, 2009 Author Share Posted September 4, 2009 Yes i noticed the name to reminds of me of something 8 minutes long.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crimson Knight Posted September 4, 2009 Share Posted September 4, 2009 Okay I Would add more i just wanted to see what you all thought of it. but yes the voice could be that of your attempt at resurrection??martins chambers or at the foot of the akatosh statue as a clue to resurrect him in the very begging of the mod??? you pick it up adds to your journal something like i found a scroll that explain Martin Septim is stuck between the living and the dead realms just an idea. or we can incorporate it into a larger book cause martins story is pretty interesting we could create a hole back story. from when he left the mages guild to this point of the story. let me know i will write it???/ or we can just l;eave it at that?? it all up to everyone here I'm cool either way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Argomirr Posted September 4, 2009 Share Posted September 4, 2009 A book about Martin's story? Sounds like a great idea! :happy: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pronam Posted September 4, 2009 Share Posted September 4, 2009 It should be possible. Try to dive into the lore though..and what he said.He lived on a farm, joined up with the mages guild. Got tired of the limitations, got seduced by daedric magic. Lost a lot of friends..(Probably because they called for a daedra or some powers of one.) he laid aside these tactics and went into priesthood....etc... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slawter500 Posted September 4, 2009 Author Share Posted September 4, 2009 also his prime daedric god was sanguine, As when you give him Sanguines rose(if you do) in the daedric artifact quest he says he once possesed it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pronam Posted September 4, 2009 Share Posted September 4, 2009 Hm.. maybe the story is originated from that rose of sanguine.. He once said he had it in his possession. Maybe they tried to derive some power from it? ---(why does fixing grammar take so long ;D I'm just at the fourth part ..) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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