Alkser Posted November 4, 2013 Share Posted November 4, 2013 Hello everybody. Been such a long time since I last posted here. So I decided to share with you all a poem I recently wrote (like few days ago). I only ever wrote 3 poems in my life, since I'm more focused on stories and songs at this very moment, but lots of people tell me that I should try to write poems a bit more. So here is the one I want to share with you, I named it "I will be" If there will be dark, I will be the lightBut not the light of the sunNot the light of the city I will be the light at the end of the tunnel,But not your deathI will be your hopeI will be your guide in this life Your messenger of hope,Messiah of happinessI will bring you backShow you the colors of life,The clouds of messagesI will lend you my hand You shall then go on,You will then be the angel. Like I said, it's a really short one, and so far only one person understood the message behind it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ithildin Posted November 5, 2013 Share Posted November 5, 2013 Very lovely poem and concept. Wonderful work. :happy: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lisnpuppy Posted November 6, 2013 Share Posted November 6, 2013 Well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deleted6317247User Posted November 6, 2013 Share Posted November 6, 2013 Ooh, such a lovely poem! Beautiful. Simply beautiful. :smile: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
demidekidasu Posted November 6, 2013 Share Posted November 6, 2013 Yes, very nice, though I really don't know much about poetry, hehe ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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