AncientSpaceAeon Posted July 6, 2009 Share Posted July 6, 2009 This is a short story of a person, formerly Dark Brotherhood Listener, taken from first person perspective : I have that nightmare again, the day I almost killed. When the creature of the night bitten me, when I almost killed. I wished I were dead by now, to experience this condition is worse than I thought. I'm a vampire ! I couldn't ever tasted the warm of the sun. Since I joined the brotherhood, I've begun a new life. Killing all those weak people, but not now ! 300 years ago, I was on my greatest glory. Being the Listener to the brotherhood I loved, but comes with a cost. Vampirism is a blessing long ago. Now it's a curse, I'm an immortal, I'll never die. Two hundred years ago, when I couldn't take it anymore, I waited outside at night, waited for the sun to come out, and killed myself. When the sun start rises, I could find my skin burning, it's too painful for me. I ran to the nearest cave, and survived. But my skin are burned, and I feel it still burning, I fell. I'm too weak to go anywhere, to ask for help, to cure myself, to go back to the sanctuary. Now, I'm still sitting on this rock. Still sitting from 200 years ago, waiting for something to take my life, cause I'll cannot ever go to the sun. I don't know what will happen to me. For some, my story maybe the worse story they ever read. But this is a new thing for me, so be nice if you are commenting my not so good story, but I'll take what you want to say, because I don't really good at making stories. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted July 6, 2009 Share Posted July 6, 2009 I like it and your english isn't that bad! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alex2avs Posted July 6, 2009 Share Posted July 6, 2009 It was very interesting... I'm waiting for the next part ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AncientSpaceAeon Posted July 7, 2009 Author Share Posted July 7, 2009 I never said this story is good, as it seems so. Cause I don't know how to continue ! :wallbash: :wallbash: :wallbash: :( :( :( Maybe this should be closed, or anyone want to continue it. I suggest closed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kruddpm Posted July 7, 2009 Share Posted July 7, 2009 I never said this story is good, as it seems so. Cause I don't know how to continue ! :wallbash: :wallbash: :wallbash: :( :( :( Maybe this should be closed, or anyone want to continue it. I suggest closed.i think you should continue i thought it was just gettin started but it was good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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