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Cool! This is going to be great. And I have this idea where the player is walking a hallway and suddenly hears a loud scream behind him. Player sees a ghastly person running towards you with a somekind of crude weapon. And just when he is about to hit the player it dissappears. It would spook me out. And there are some ghosts in martigens monster mod that come fast towards screaming and when they hit you, you fly back and the ghost is gone
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Cool! This is going to be great. And I have this idea where the player is walking a hallway and suddenly hears a loud scream behind him. Player sees a ghastly person running towards you with a somekind of crude weapon. And just when he is about to hit the player it dissappears. It would spook me out. And there are some ghosts in martigens monster mod that come fast towards screaming and when they hit you, you fly back and the ghost is gone

 

How do you want the journal to be, like gory ( Ever played Doom 3 :) ), or just scary?

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Here the journal so far,

 

[After flipping through the first dozen pages of the Journal it is mainly about random and unimportant things until you get to one page that interests you.]

 

Well I've been working here for a few years now but lately some very strange things have been happening lately.

 

Last night one of the people staying here started screaming in the middle of the night and actually bit a chunk out of his own arm. I was able to stop the bleeding but nothing like this has ever happened before.

 

[You flip through a few more pages]

 

This place is getting creepier by the day, last night someone actually clawed out there own eye then when he was taken to me, his voice was slurred. At first we thought he was going crazy, until we realized that he had also bitten off nearly half of his tounge.

 

I'm glad I nearly have enough to get a real job, one that doesn't involve insane people in an asylum.

 

*next page*

 

Man I really hate this place, incidents are becoming more and more frequent, there are noises coming from the attic, like whispers. And the incidents are becoming a lot more violent.

 

Last night someone stole a guards knife and killed one of his roomates, he cut out the tounge, eyes, cut off the ears and then took out the heart. When we found him in his room he was sitting in a corner gently rubbing he heart of the man he had just killed.

 

Of course I could not save the victim, and the killer was hanged to death.

 

And then just yesterday someone chewed off one of there own fingers. I am going to leave this place soon, whether or not I have the the money I need, I am NOT going to die in this place, I just am not.

 

[The next page is even more disturbing]

 

Oh my god, I think even I will go crazy in this place, the voices seem to be becoming louder eveyday.

At around midnight last night we found an entire room slaughtered. Three guards five inmates and 2 of my fellow clerics all died in that one room. We found the killer on a bed in the corner of the room with a knife. He was chewing on his fingers and his mouth and his hands where bloody.

 

I am leaving this place tomorrow, all the preparations have been made and I am leaving no matter what.

 

[The next page explains the events that lead up to everyone dying in the asylum]

 

Oh my god, oh my god, OH MY GOD!

The inmates have all gone crazy, insane!

They have killed most of the guards and I am the only one alive in the lower level, they are trying to break into my room through the door. I hear the voices in the attic screaming. . . Oh my god. . . I can see them through my window, I see them... I see them stabbing my fallen friends on the floor, ... its just terrible, I feel sick . . . Oh my god they are breaking in I hear the door splintering, I will grab the silver longsword I keep behind my bed and try to fend them off. . .

OH MY GOD. . .

OH MY GOD. . .

OH MY GO-

 

Thats it, yeah I know its disgusting :sick: its supposed to be that way. I tried to make it as gory as possible so that it would add as scary an ambience to the asylum as possible, knowing that all of those this happened in the very room that your standing in. Tell me if its a little to much and I'll get rid of some of the nasty parts ok.

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I think that I could make a small little video for the "Cool! This is going to be great. And I have this idea where the player is walking a hallway and suddenly hears a loud scream behind him. Player sees a ghastly person running towards you with a somekind of crude weapon. And just when he is about to hit the player it dissappears." idea!, and I could script something like, player turns a corner and sees a ghost, player walks up to ghost, ghost appears behind player, (wicked laughter) ghost attacks player, ghost dieds and disappears, this happens maybe three times, sound good?

 

Assasins backstory

 

The Royal Assasins, they've never failed, If someone wants an enemy dead, and the Royal Assasins are nearby, that enemy might aswell be screaming already

 

The Assasins dont kill for money, they are not mere(mear? dont know how to spell it) mercenaries, they dont even kill for pleasure, they kill for the oppurtunity to showcase their skills, The Assasins have no true master, they respect the individual with the most skill, and therefore, the only way to command an assasins respect is to defeat one in battle, a feat that has never been achieved, but if one were ever to succeed, They would command the respect of all assasins below the defeateds skill, Numerous [Enemy name]have tried. All now reside in the earth, Well parts of them anyway. The Royal Assasins moved to [islands name, did we decide yet?] for they had heard of the skill of others there, Men like the Blood Paladins worthy of respect, ****This bit here is just a little thing i thought up your choice**** But the Assasins began to see that these men as mere military men, Simple and no sense of pride in their actions, and from then on the Royal Assasins have held a secret disliking to the Blood Paladins

 

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Sorry that sucked

 

I like it :)

And its mere ;)

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No its supposed to be a haunted asylum, the inmates went insane, killed everybody they could, survivors locked them in, and then they died of starvation and madness. And now the Asylum is haunted by there ghosts.
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