LordTenaim Posted October 20, 2009 Author Share Posted October 20, 2009 thank you for your thoughts on this poem Species it is much appriciated and what you say is unfortuantly true it seems to be one of the baser sides of the human race. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordTenaim Posted November 8, 2009 Author Share Posted November 8, 2009 A new form of Marathon, This requires the runners to run the exact distance between Athens and Sparta perferably over similar terraen also they have to do it in the armor of the ancient greeks! Changed Discus, this involves the competitors throwing cheap plates at a concrete wall at a distance of 250ft, you are given points for getting the bul's eye, smashing the plate on the target a spectacually as possible or getting the plate to go even further and then return to your hand. WHAT ARE YOUR THOUGHTS ON THESE AMENDMENTS. :biggrin: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordTenaim Posted January 20, 2010 Author Share Posted January 20, 2010 Time the great leveller,The thing all bow to,We all answer to time,But what is Time.Is it just a sensation we haveIs it a real thing.Scientists argue.All I know is We allSee it's will. Hope this isn't thread necromancy. :unsure: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Herculine Posted January 21, 2010 Share Posted January 21, 2010 I like it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maharg67 Posted January 21, 2010 Share Posted January 21, 2010 Very good, Lord Tenaim! :starwars: :banana: :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordTenaim Posted January 21, 2010 Author Share Posted January 21, 2010 Yes I like it to, the inspiration hit after catchin up on readin the Manga Bleach. :biggrin: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordTenaim Posted March 4, 2010 Author Share Posted March 4, 2010 I feel so great,I feel I can do anything.So much energy,so little time,Who cares about Sleep. Continuously moving,Not wanting to be still.Laughing and smiling,That's what all I want to do,I don't care about anything. I feel so bad,I feel I can't do anything.So little energy,So much time,I care about sleep. Curling up in a ball,Not wanting to do a thing.Sinking and hurting,Blood all I see,My life I want to end. A poem I hope expresses some of how I feel after having a very sudden and illuminating attack of depression, which led to me being diagnosed with Bipolar. :thanks: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Balagor Posted March 5, 2010 Share Posted March 5, 2010 Great way to express it. I wasn´t even through the second verse, when the though "Bipolar" struck me. Being BP myself, I can thoughoutly follow your thoughts. :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordTenaim Posted March 5, 2010 Author Share Posted March 5, 2010 Thank you Balagor, I was attempting to express my self and BP for others to see. Hopefully this will touch other peoples thoughts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maharg67 Posted March 9, 2010 Share Posted March 9, 2010 (edited) It has done. The poem was familiar in feel to me because I am also bipolar. I once joked that having bipolar was like having a great urge to keep travelling from the south pole to the north pole and back again. Sometimes I wish it were so straight forward. :banana: :wallbash: :yes: :no: Thank you for your courage, Lord Tenaim. :thanks: Edited March 9, 2010 by Maharg67 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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