dezdimona Posted September 6, 2009 Share Posted September 6, 2009 What is a fool?What does heseek? He opens hismouth often,but rationality doeshe rarely ifever speak. To himself,Hereigns supremealthough his wordsthoughts and actionsare taken toextremes Oh fool,Oh fool, high uponyour throne,does it evercross your mindwhile you areso alone? You seek recognitionfor your lifeof unhappy ways,lashing out inanger,your sense ofhumoris at bestblasé You think youroh so muchbetterthan those youseek to annoy you think yourselfa man amongmen,yet your mindis that ofa boy. Oh fool,Ohfool sitting highupon your flimsywall,Your words anddeeds and actionswill one daybe your downfall But you'll neversee it coming,you'll never get the clue, The only oneyou truly hurtis after allonly you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maharg67 Posted September 6, 2009 Share Posted September 6, 2009 Excellent! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted September 6, 2009 Author Share Posted September 6, 2009 thank you as always. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GenDonuts Posted September 7, 2009 Share Posted September 7, 2009 That was really good dezi. I really liked how it flowed, especially the rhyme scheme. :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted September 7, 2009 Author Share Posted September 7, 2009 GenDonuts said: That was really good dezi. I really liked how it flowed, especially the rhyme scheme. :thumbsup:thank you kind sir. :biggrin: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fifoo Posted September 8, 2009 Share Posted September 8, 2009 It's a masterpiece, dezdimona, and it put a lot of things straight again in place in human mind's puzzle... Sincerely, from the heart, you're a great Lady :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted September 8, 2009 Author Share Posted September 8, 2009 Fifoo said: It's a masterpiece, dezdimona, and it put a lot of things straight again in place in human mind's puzzle... Sincerely, from the heart, you're a great Lady :thumbsup:you honor me sir with your kind comments and remarks.Thank you. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aotlianna Posted September 8, 2009 Share Posted September 8, 2009 Remarkable. Loved every part of it. =) Can't wait to read some more if you share it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted September 8, 2009 Author Share Posted September 8, 2009 Aotlianna said: Remarkable. Loved every part of it. =) Can't wait to read some more if you share it!thank you. have you read these? http://thenexusforums.com/index.php?showtopic=66160 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zephyr2011 Posted September 20, 2009 Share Posted September 20, 2009 This is perhaps one of my favorite poems I've ever read, it's so true. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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