Omeletter Posted October 1, 2009 Share Posted October 1, 2009 I'm Drennor, "Dark-Shepherd" as villagers called me, because I'm a Dark Elf... Well, not really, I WAS a Dark Elf! You may be wondering why I'm saying that, or should I say, writing this note with old ink. I know someone will find this note, someday, and I'm sure you'll find it in Sharpstone Cave, where it's supposed to be...Part OneWhy I'm saying that I was Dark Elf? Because all what's left from me is bones, yes, living bones. I was a shepherd in the village nearby, the goblins are there now, yes, right now. I've escaped, searched for food and shelter in this small cave, but the only thing I've found is the table, where some stones was on. I didn't knew the purpose of them, but as soon as I have touched it, I was taken to strange room, that looked like Ayleid Ruin. I've tried to run back to the portal but its closed right when I've approached it...Part Two will be here soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
species5478 Posted October 1, 2009 Share Posted October 1, 2009 You seem to have a definite image in your head, of what you want to say. There's a story there, and I want to read it. Please hear me when I say, I think you have potential, but not in spurts. Can you give us more than a paragraph or two? You may be going for something new...notes on nexus for instance, would be different...but I've read longer poems! lol...anyway, your attention to detail shows its eyes. I know about Sharpstone Cave... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Omeletter Posted October 2, 2009 Author Share Posted October 2, 2009 Thanks, I didn't have time yesterday to make part 2, this is like Introduction. So Part 2 will be here today. Oh, I didn't know that there's sharpstone cave already, thanks for telling me. This story is based in TES 4 world, but in my travels I haven't find Sharpstone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alecn1519 Posted October 4, 2009 Share Posted October 4, 2009 I like it. Can't wait for part 2. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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