Metal song

[TheCalliton]

ok, it seems that chemistry class is the source of the inspiration for this since i was utterly bored during it and started this

THE EXECUTIONER

BY: W.G.H.

(note: the reference to God in the beggining is what was actually said, and it adds a cool effect)

 

Opening, spoken

"And so, because of your crimes, you have been sentenced to death by decapitation. May God have mercy on your soul..."

 

Bassist starts a low rumble that builds

Lead guitarist adds in a long high pitched note for a few mesures then they suddenly break intot he chorus

 

Chorus

"Executioner! Executioner! killing all of you! Life is pouring through!

Executioner! Executioner! His joy is your pain! Watch the shining blade"

Riff and short solo then verse one

 

VERSE ONE

"Over the years, My mask has changed

But those I silence. Are all the same

I swing the axe! I flip the switch!

But always I grant. your last wish!"

 

short riff

CHORUS AGAIN

 

VERSE TWO

"The time has come. For you to die.

The time is ripe. For your soul to fly.

The blades are sharp. The noose is tight.

It is time for you. To walk towards the light."

 

riff then awesome solo

 

VERSE THREE

"As your head rolls. The church's bells toll.

Your family cries. As the priests close your eyes/

Your world is gone. And this is the song

OF THE"

 

breaks into chorus instantly

after chorus, it breaks into a fast guitar part with a fast drum part as all the member say "Executioner Executioner!" wait a second then repeat as it fades out

then, just after it finishes fading, the singer screams out

"OFF WITH HIS HEAD"

they do one last quick chord and the song ends

 

 

so what do ya'll think?

should i try to come up with guitar, bass, and drum parts for it?

[TheCalliton]

oh i have another intro idea

 

*evil laugh begins.* Its... time... to... DIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE *breaks into chorus*

[alex2avs]

Nice ! ^_^

[Germandeathkittiez]

This is very original, I could really imagine this whole song as I was reading it. The lyrics are consistent and very good except for the end of VERSE 1 "But I will always grant. Your last wish." it didn't really make sense to me in contrast with the line before it.

[Nogford]

Well, at least it rhymes. That's something.

[UncleRoe]

Yup.. sure could go for a mosh pit right about now..

[Pyrosocial]

i agree with ninja, it might be better "But always I will grant your dying wish!"

 

be a bad A Metallica song.

pretty freaking awsome i must say.

[TheCalliton]

thanks guys, i'll take this to heart

if anyone has other ideas, please tell me