Keanumoreira Posted October 3, 2010 Share Posted October 3, 2010 Edit: Oops! Wrong poem! That was meant for disposal but oh well. :laugh: Here's what was suppose to be posted: O mighty fields of the wind which told!O sun of heat and grace!Warm the flowers lest they become so cold!And O how my love she will shiver!How my heart it will sink in quiver!I will jump with no fear; how so to face?O mighty fields of the wind which told!O sun of heat and grace! O seas who roar in wind which flails!O the salt I not betray!Ride steady, but calm, not so to bail!So that to enjoy the light!I use to banish her fright!Pain for pain, caught in the fray!O seas who roar in wind which flails!O the salt I not betray! O beaks that cut through air with flutter!O Gull who stares at sun!Do not care for the water that makes you shutter!Stay with feet to sing to love!And here will fly my winter dove!My wish will be told but done!O beaks that cut through air with flutter!O Gull who stares at sun! O spring who whispers of glory blossom!O come when all is ready!I have chased on, and on that furry possum!For it annoys her so I must act!It enflames me that is fact!For all must be right and steady!O spring who whispers of glory blossom!O come when all is ready! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maharg67 Posted October 3, 2010 Share Posted October 3, 2010 Well written but I will read it again to better understandi it. Your writing never ceases to be facsinating and impressive. You put a lot of effort into them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keanumoreira Posted October 3, 2010 Author Share Posted October 3, 2010 Well written but I will read it again to better understandi it. Your writing never ceases to be facsinating and impressive. You put a lot of effort into them. Thank you M. I knew before I read it that it would be hard to understand and it kinda of is. But the meaning's there I assure you. :happy: Thanks for reading. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SilverDNA Posted October 7, 2010 Share Posted October 7, 2010 If i got it right that is a love poem about wining a loved one's heart A very wondrous work from you. Hard to hold and hard to grasp. A very deep looking one KeanumoreiraThank you 4 sharing it with us.I liked this part most O beaks that cut through air with flutter!O Gull who stares at sun!Do not care for the water that makes you shutter!Stay with feet to sing to love!And here will fly my winter dove!My wish will be told but done!O beaks that cut through air with flutter!O Gull who stares at sun! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keanumoreira Posted October 8, 2010 Author Share Posted October 8, 2010 If i got it right that is a love poem about wining a loved one's heart A very wondrous work from you. Hard to hold and hard to grasp. A very deep looking one KeanumoreiraThank you 4 sharing it with us.I liked this part most O beaks that cut through air with flutter!O Gull who stares at sun!Do not care for the water that makes you shutter!Stay with feet to sing to love!And here will fly my winter dove!My wish will be told but done!O beaks that cut through air with flutter!O Gull who stares at sun! Thank you Silver. :happy: I put a lot of time into this poem, and yet, it seems you know more about it than I do. I guess love holds no hints, not even to the writer such as myself. :laugh: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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