Trapiki Posted February 10, 2011 Share Posted February 10, 2011 Wolves howl,Soldiers fall,Walls crumble,Lovers call. Mercy fades,Misery beckons,Hate blooms,Fate reckons. Pestilence grows,Famine late,War Cries,Death awaits. Shadows darken,Light fades,Colour bleachesRemnant shades. Plots deepen,Enemies stilled,Blades sharpened,Emperors killed. Justice revenged,Hands cold,Crowns pawned,Men sold. Gods plot,Man fails,Sands drop,Time sails. Standing stone,Eyes open,Mind gone,None hoping. Whipped hide,Broken soul,Whispers reign,Something foul. Chains split,Slaves freed,Polar direction,Empires need. I wrote this some time ago, to me it still feels as powerful as it was when I wrote it. I was somewhat inspired by the rhythm of a song in one of the Dragons of Pern novels by Anne McCaffrey and an artwork by Rob Alexander called At the End of it All. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maharg67 Posted February 10, 2011 Share Posted February 10, 2011 This is poetry, not poetry sort of, and I found it good. I will need to reread this at least once to get a better feel for it for I found some of the lines more obscure and less 'immediate' and 'effective' than others. I still have appreciation and give kudos. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HazardHighlanders2011 Posted February 10, 2011 Share Posted February 10, 2011 wow, that's great Trapiki, i never knew you were into poetry! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trapiki Posted February 10, 2011 Author Share Posted February 10, 2011 I felt that only by giving coupled words that the viewer would bring their own interpretations to the mix. To me it makes me think of Romanesque architecture and people, other people will see something completely different and that is an interesting point for me. It's the story of the Fall of an Empire. Thank you c: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ranokoa Posted April 15, 2011 Share Posted April 15, 2011 I must say I enjoyed reading it. Very nice, and kind of gripping. I didn't know you enjoyed poetry as well? Although, admittedly, I should be more active in my poetry contributions. Be well, sleep well, fight well, live long.~Ranokoa Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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