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I fully intend to redo the story but as a series of stories done in sequence.

 

 

A king once walked upon a path of hard gold

thinking himself glorious

thinking his journey glorious

but a fool he was

for the gold was treacherous

while around him stretched a garden green

dirty but full of life

and one day the king slipped

ending his glory

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THE MOTIONLESS DANCE

 

So you think you can dance?

 

Well I danced and danced on a great wooden stage but they did not understand.

 

For I staid perfectly still and explained that this was a motionless dance, a perfect dance.

 

No, they did not understand.

 

Perhaps I should have jumped up and down just a little?

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LordWushin, thank you for you positive feedback! :thumbsup: Edited by Maharg67
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A gasp of breath

from a person assumed dead

like a symbol of hope

that not all things end badly!

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The sight of her startles my vision

 

The sound of her voice is the opera of my soul

 

The smell of her is the sweetest of perfumes

 

But she is gone now

 

And I will never know her again!

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THE ROAD TO MY HEART

 

IS MADE OF ROSES

 

COMPLETE WITH SHARP THORNS

 

BUT REPLETE WITH THE PROMISE

 

OF SWEET SCENTED PERFUME

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A light bulb goes off in my head

suddenly many clues now lead to clarification

a moment of brilliance

I feel alive with ideas!

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