Keanumoreira Posted March 10, 2011 Share Posted March 10, 2011 (edited) The call to war is strong and swift,But on this front the calm shall drift.For most would think that wars a breach,But what would you say about the beach? Like trumpets of battle, the shells shall roar,The sands of defenders will swarm the shores.The fingers of waves will cut from the deep,And topple their castles with a terrible sweep. Come forth shall ride blue's fleet of scouts,These Kingdoms creatures they will wash about.But like a dragon the winds will breathe,And push back the tides of the tumbling sleeves. But when all has settled, and the fire has risen,Daylight will break from its nocturnal prison.With it will bring a peace from its reach,To ease the war upon the beach… Edited March 10, 2011 by Keanumoreira Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheSwedishPancake Posted March 10, 2011 Share Posted March 10, 2011 Another captivating piece of work, Kean. I love it. Keep going! I look forward to many more :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keanumoreira Posted March 10, 2011 Author Share Posted March 10, 2011 (edited) Thanks again Swedish, I'm trying. :happy: Edited March 10, 2011 by Keanumoreira Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maharg67 Posted March 10, 2011 Share Posted March 10, 2011 Good going, Keanu! :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordWushin Posted March 10, 2011 Share Posted March 10, 2011 Excellent work! Another nice read. :smile: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keanumoreira Posted March 10, 2011 Author Share Posted March 10, 2011 Thanks guys, your appreciation is noted. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SilverDNA Posted March 11, 2011 Share Posted March 11, 2011 Nice one! The 1st two paragraphs remind me of a fan poem i heard on a fan convention some time ago... but tthere someone made the rhythm stanza at the end on kingdoms with Klingons :laugh: You made a nice piece here Keanu keep it up this is a precious poem from you . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keanumoreira Posted March 11, 2011 Author Share Posted March 11, 2011 Nice one! The 1st two paragraphs remind me of a fan poem i heard on a fan convention some time ago... but tthere someone made the rhythm stanza at the end on kingdoms with Klingons :laugh: You made a nice piece here Keanu keep it up this is a precious poem from you . lol, thank you Uncle. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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