HazardHighlanders2011 Posted April 19, 2011 Share Posted April 19, 2011 Long ago, long before humans existed, the Divine lived on Earth. They were powerful beings that could control the elments, Earth, Fire, Water, and Air. Only two beings were granted the honor of wielding the most powerful elements of all, Light and Darkness. Serenity was the wielder of light and Dameon was the wielder of darkness. Throughout the years, Serenity and Dameon ruled over the Divine beings peacefully and kept balance over the world. Unfortunately, that all changed one day. Dameon had come across the scroll of Thedas, a powerful scroll that housed a demon wolf named Fenrir, an ancient demon that was locked away by the first Divine, for they feared the power Fenrir held.Fenrir held great hatred towards the Divine, and planned to have them destroy themselves since he couldn`t do it from inside the scroll.Fenrir manipulated Dameon, led him to believe that Serenity was planning on killing Dameon and absorbing his power so that she could gain full control over the Divine. Dameon felt furious. How dare she betray me, he thought angrily........thats all i got so far. tell me what you think about it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HazardHighlanders2011 Posted April 19, 2011 Author Share Posted April 19, 2011 by the way, i didn't write this story, ComputerAngel did. she mailed it to me and asked me to post this first part for her. she doesn't have a computer at home. so she's only able to post when she's at school. which is why she asked me to post. so most of the rest of the story will be posted by her. unless she's at home and wants me to do it for her. post some constructive criticism please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tokyobiohazard Posted April 20, 2011 Share Posted April 20, 2011 yay! angel, i did it! good job! *thumbs up* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maharg67 Posted April 28, 2011 Share Posted April 28, 2011 Good concept; would love to see it taken further as a story. :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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