VitaminChi Posted August 10, 2011 Share Posted August 10, 2011 (edited) {Torches}August 9, 2011(Free verse) His silhouette flails wildylike his sword in battleUpon the stone is darknessuntil the torches flickerand the shadows shift Edited July 28, 2012 by VitaminChi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordWushin Posted August 11, 2011 Share Posted August 11, 2011 Good, very good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitaminChi Posted August 13, 2011 Author Share Posted August 13, 2011 Thank you :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maharg67 Posted August 14, 2011 Share Posted August 14, 2011 (edited) Good! Interesting use of words! Kudos! :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: Edited August 14, 2011 by Maharg67 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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