anbeegod Posted July 6, 2016 Share Posted July 6, 2016 Expected release date: 23-24/7 The lines (about 360 lines) and misc stuff are completed. Waiting for the voice actress to finish her matters - if it was someone else, I wouldn't bother to wait. http://67.media.tumblr.com/7a943a5e10588c06e86b2a0bf23a3f55/tumblr_o9wdls0ELe1vyxyino1_1280.jpg http://66.media.tumblr.com/70f1f9bae659c906d21f7186d433455f/tumblr_o9wdls0ELe1vyxyino2_1280.jpg http://65.media.tumblr.com/92d29b8d5b59370d6332b58b4b51df62/tumblr_o9wdls0ELe1vyxyino3_1280.jpg I'm going to make a Redguard version as well. I like brown girls. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KingDon2K Posted July 6, 2016 Share Posted July 6, 2016 Very nice lol, is it voice acted at all? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anbeegod Posted July 6, 2016 Author Share Posted July 6, 2016 Very nice lol, is it voice acted at all? It will be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DoctorKaizeld Posted July 6, 2016 Share Posted July 6, 2016 I see some typos but it looks fine for the most part. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anbeegod Posted July 6, 2016 Author Share Posted July 6, 2016 (edited) I see some typos but it looks fine for the most part. Such as? I'm going to proofread it. Edited July 6, 2016 by anbeegod Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DoctorKaizeld Posted July 6, 2016 Share Posted July 6, 2016 Sorry not typo, its a grammar issue. Last picture second part of the sentence: "but i'm thinking if you can use some company." I get what you are going for here but it doesnt work with the rest of the sentence. I think if you swap "thinking" with "wondering" it'll fix the issue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anbeegod Posted July 6, 2016 Author Share Posted July 6, 2016 Sorry not typo, its a grammar issue. Last picture second part of the sentence: "but i'm thinking if you can use some company." I get what you are going for here but it doesnt work with the rest of the sentence. I think if you swap "thinking" with "wondering" it'll fix the issue. Okay! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DoctorKaizeld Posted July 6, 2016 Share Posted July 6, 2016 I like the character though. Nice to see something with no silly anime nonsense or sexualized to absurd degrees. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elias555 Posted July 6, 2016 Share Posted July 6, 2016 Apart from the invisible cup, she looks nice. What kind of character is she personality wise? Sorry not typo, its a grammar issue. Last picture second part of the sentence: "but i'm thinking if you can use some company."I get what you are going for here but it doesnt work with the rest of the sentence. I think if you swap "thinking" with "wondering" it'll fix the issue.I think it would work better something like:"but, if you could use the/some company..." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DoctorKaizeld Posted July 6, 2016 Share Posted July 6, 2016 That is another way to do it but that depends on the characters personality Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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