gloomygrim Posted March 1, 2012 Share Posted March 1, 2012 The main story is still in a basic very vauge outline as yet, ( i only started this this morning, although i have done rather a lot of work on the CK the story writing i have this and a few notes lyin about the house). The east empire company landed on the coast of the lands of Whenua, With the prospect of a lush new land to take more over the prospect of money, they then set up a camp and made a start on building a town. The Tenhi of the tribe (tribe unnammed yet) sent the Tiaki to tell them to leave there homeland. The east empire company killed the Tiaki and ignored his words. Basis of the titles of the NPCs maori based. With the exception of Tenhi, which is finnish. Religion is bassed around nature and a oneness with life. Name of the world space is Whenua, which means country or homeland, The land mass has names from my own home towns forests and old quarries, (Devils rock, blue waters and eagles nest ). There will be a full questline i am aiming for around 3/4 hours, which includes main quests and side quests, I would say higher but right now the world space is only of a small size, around 45 cells. There will be caves, monster lairs and a few odd bandit camps. After excavating a tomb they released the soul of a renegade druid, who then kills the entire east empire company and then sets his sights on turning the lands into a barren dead wasteland were he can rule over the souls of the dead. Yeah thats never been done before lol. The quests i have not yet outlined or planned, as i would like to get most of the landmass created first. The NPCSTenhi = chief or elder.Leader of the druids, Old, mage type. Heavy use of ranged spells, lowest level is adept. Unkillable. Kaitiaki = gaurdian.Ranger type gaurds of the druid’s hold. Some armed with bows, the remainder have axes and shields. Tiaki = priest, healer.Female, young, master was killed, mournfull but not vindictive. unarmed, has healing spells and some of xilvers midas magic spells (if he ever gets back to me lol). Ariki = master of the Kaitiakistrong willed, firm beliver in tradition, holds a strong possition within the tribe.Armed with a great axe. Most of the tribe’s men are Kaitiaki, and the women are homemakers, farmers, or Tiaki initiates. Any C+C's welcome, cant improve anything if im not told, plus the story i need a few ideas lol. GRIM. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SummonerBeingOfChaos Posted March 1, 2012 Share Posted March 1, 2012 (edited) Don't druids want to protect nature? Why would this one want to kill ll the plants off? I know he's a renegade, but it still seems odd. Though is does sound like he's a druid that wanted a career change and went necromancer. Edited March 1, 2012 by SummonerBeingOfChaos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gloomygrim Posted March 1, 2012 Author Share Posted March 1, 2012 Since i put this i have wrote down a few more ideas, he was the brother of the Tenhi, and when he was not selected to lead the clan he renounced everything he belived in and vowed to find a way to create life his self, he was then tricked by some crazy necromancer or a god into using the dark arts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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