dezdimona Posted October 6, 2008 Author Share Posted October 6, 2008 very nice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reaper13 Posted October 8, 2008 Share Posted October 8, 2008 wow. i wish that i could write my story as well as you write pomes. keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DracoRazgriz Posted October 9, 2008 Share Posted October 9, 2008 hmm..who're talking about Reaper? Dezi or somebody else? - Raz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alex2avs Posted October 9, 2008 Share Posted October 9, 2008 Simply amazing :ohmy: and beautifuland incredible :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reaper13 Posted October 9, 2008 Share Posted October 9, 2008 hmm..who're talking about Reaper? Dezi or somebody else? - Raz i guess all of you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted October 9, 2008 Author Share Posted October 9, 2008 hmm..who're talking about Reaper? Dezi or somebody else? - Raz i guess all of younice reply, very tactful! :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DracoRazgriz Posted October 10, 2008 Share Posted October 10, 2008 Indeed, A Very nice reply, Reaper.Just to let you know, I was just curious as to who you meant is all. If I had to take a pick, I'd say Dezi. :thumbsup: - Raz OT> damn ..... just banged my kneecap on the desk. ( Not Fun ) Owwwww!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reaper13 Posted October 10, 2008 Share Posted October 10, 2008 Indeed, A Very nice reply, Reaper.Just to let you know, I was just curious as to who you meant is all. If I had to take a pick, I'd say Dezi. :thumbsup: - Raz OT> damn ..... just banged my kneecap on the desk. ( Not Fun ) Owwwww!!! i get hurt somehow everyday. i'm going to go to work soon and i'll probley burn my hand on a hot plate(i work at my dads pizza place) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted October 13, 2008 Author Share Posted October 13, 2008 Sometimes after reading something,a bit later I'm struck by inspiration, and so it was with this. Myrmaad's Poem She walks in the shadows,face hidden fromthe light, Her spirit and soul,seek out thenight A spectre, a wisp, ashadow on thewall,yet I know whatshe does,she answers thecall Beauty and mind'mixed in avesseloverflowing its bounds,her life it doeswrestle Shadows and darknessfeed her innerself,the fog and it's secrets,perpetuateher wealth She glides thruthe half-lightin search ofher prey, Take me withyou oh phantom,or at least,stop and play! The Chronicles of Sticks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted October 31, 2008 Author Share Posted October 31, 2008 I place the ringyou gave me,upon the dressertop My bags are packed,my love isdead,for me it'stime to stop I walk slowlytowards thedoorway,see the pictureson the floor,the happy timesare long gone,you'll break myheart no more. The time wespent together,promises made inbed,would have beenmuch easier,if they'd beenleft unsaid! Emeralds are ohso green,and rubies ohso red,diamonds are forever.unless your loveis dead Kisses given indeceit,the smell ofher on yourskin,you promised meyou'd always loveme,but return to heragain A fool was Ito listen,to think you'dchange for me, But I've left yousomething,a final wordfrom me,it will be myfarewell gift,just for you,from me. I knew you'd cheat,I knew you'dlie,I'm really notnaive I screwed yourbrother yesterday,and you bestfriend Steve! They really arethe better men,lonny is one too,so is Carl andDanny Thats my finalgift to you!!!! The Chronicles of Sticks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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