dirvish Posted September 5, 2012 Share Posted September 5, 2012 Then she did smile upon mewe went to the meadowsand then to the great forestshe found me as i amwe went to the deserts we ran naked through the sandthe stars shone upon uswe aspired on the futurethen suddenly, she was just gonewe saw as it was and upon her stone i still have her smile Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maharg67 Posted September 6, 2012 Share Posted September 6, 2012 (edited) Good! Look forward to reading more of your work! Suggest you put your poems into one topic, keep adding to it. Seems to work well. Kudos! Edited September 6, 2012 by Maharg67 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dirvish Posted September 6, 2012 Author Share Posted September 6, 2012 Thanks,yesterday is a date of anniversary of great sadness for me. I just felt motivated and wrote both of those off the tip of my mind. Looking today... it felt really good to write. I have not done so in a long time... you just might see some more.---d Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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