My little Egyptian friend is right... you are indeed a writing machine. Prolific, I believe I once said. You ever think of doing any co-authoring. I have tons of ideas but no time to write them down...
I don't want people to thing I'm like a broken record just repeating the same things over and over... ...but if something is really good I can't say anything but that it's really good. This is really good!
I love a story that has a good balance of action/adventure and interpersonal relationship stuff... the characters feel very real... if I haven't said it yet let me do so now... this is very well written. Please give us more!