KottonKing Posted April 23, 2009 Share Posted April 23, 2009 The power of a tearIs hugging a long lost loveBeing far away, yet feeling so nearWatching her dance like the skies boastful dove The power of a tearIs know hope is a good thingHoping life isn't full of fearPraying that love is an endless thing The power of a tearIs happiness when touched deeplyFeeling freedom at the edge of the worlds pierSadness when treated so cheaply The power of a tearIs the wordless feeling that needs no explanation Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted April 24, 2009 Share Posted April 24, 2009 nice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maharg67 Posted July 5, 2009 Share Posted July 5, 2009 Impressive and deep Genuine Like it very much! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Netwit2008 Posted July 14, 2009 Share Posted July 14, 2009 Indeed tears are often underrated, yet they are healing and cleansing to the soul. Good capture of their essence here! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Omeletter Posted August 19, 2009 Share Posted August 19, 2009 Good poem, i liked it! Keep up the good work here! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordTenaim Posted August 20, 2009 Share Posted August 20, 2009 the tear and life,they are intwinned,without one,what is the other. Beautiful and shows the deep understanding of the tear wish to see more of your work. :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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