Thor. Posted July 31, 2012 Share Posted July 31, 2012 (edited) hmm it should be called the John madden Amulet http://forums.nexusmods.com/public/style_emoticons/dark/teehee.gif I don't know why that came to mind????? http://forums.nexusmods.com/public/style_emoticons/dark/confused.gif Edited July 31, 2012 by Thor. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
naomis8329 Posted July 31, 2012 Share Posted July 31, 2012 hmm it should be called the John madden Amulet http://forums.nexusmods.com/public/style_emoticons/dark/teehee.gif You enjoying it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor. Posted July 31, 2012 Share Posted July 31, 2012 (edited) yes actually i am, so far. Now it only needs a secret plot and twist, like the Children are of some great importance. Edited July 31, 2012 by Thor. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
naomis8329 Posted July 31, 2012 Share Posted July 31, 2012 hmm, you've missed the beginning but we'll let you have a copy if you want it :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor. Posted July 31, 2012 Share Posted July 31, 2012 Lol just post it in the rp section, curious on whats happening next, i would follow along but my mind hurts.. No inspiration. http://forums.nexusmods.com/public/style_emoticons/dark/teehee.gif As my previous post http://forums.nexusmods.com/public/style_emoticons/dark/teehee.gif Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
naomis8329 Posted July 31, 2012 Share Posted July 31, 2012 lol what ya like.... thought you'd like to share some creativity and get people motivated here. may just work you never know :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deleted54170User Posted July 31, 2012 Share Posted July 31, 2012 While I was running with sis in my arms the amulet slipped out of my collar and touched my chest. I could see the oncoming duo fighting their way into the lower chambers, but I could still see the hallway in front of me. They were both causing me to lose focus. I wanted to stop turn and run away. I noticed as I tried to change course I could see through and around the edges of my vision. I was panicking as I ran, I began to giggle hysterically while tried to coordinate my moves so I did not run into anything. I tried to remember what I heard the battle mage telling the new recruits how to stay Breath quick in and short breath out when you thrust or parry. I As I breathed to match my steps, In one two three, out, left right left. The vision started to thin, the images were still there as the great door began to open I could see through to the next room. The guards had spied us coming and readied for our arrival. I stepped over the threshold and leaned back until I was sliding on my bottom and my back touched the ground keeping Sis from banging against anything. I could see them and they had taken the front door just as I saw the main doors for our arrival to the banquet room open., I yelled, "They're at the bottom of the stair's." The guards slid the great bar across the door. Sir Howard gave the orders, "Get them all in the passageway. Get them safely away. We will stand and hold the door until they..." As we went into the secret door through the fireplace wall an explosion cut off Sir Howards voice. The great stone mason secret door closed tight. I saw the vision in the dark so much clearer it gave me a fright. I pulled the amulet away from my skin. Mom saw me. "Where did you get that? Never mind. Come along! Father! Aaron! He has the eye of Newt!" Dad halted. Waiting for us to get to the second cave secreted passage door. He took sis from me and gave sis to Mother. He looked at me, "Son touch it. I will carry you. Can you describe the attackers to me?" "I'll do my best. I saw the one clearly before. He's slender tall and muscled. He has a white hood with somethings that look like stars on the cowls fringe. He has brown hair and a tiny bit of a beard in the middle of his chin. He's smiling. He has two gold teeth. His nose is like the upper beak of a parrot. His chin sticks out like a crescent moon. His eyes are yellow." Dad set me in the small boat. He pulled on the string, so the amulet came away from my chest. "Stop and rest." He looked across the boat at Mom. "It's Coandor." The oars made lapping sounds in the water as the craft slid along on the water. Dad held me close and I closed my eyes and fell asleep. "oh heck, oh heck, oh heck." my mantra repeated over and over and over as my brother went through the doors sliding, hitting the floor, sheltering me from the marble with an "Ooof" that I felt as well as heard. Mama, Papa, the secret door opening, a loud "BANG" and then the "Whoooooosh" of the door closing. Papa handing me to Mama, Papa picking up my brother. Their voices low and urgent as we hurried through the tunnels, twisting this way and that. I couldn't keep up and closed my eyes feeling dizzy and sick. Mama saying "Its ok Midgit, its ok, nearly there sweetling, nearly there." Her mantra, I don't know. Fresh air, the smell of water, the slapping of water on wood. Hands helping us into the boat. Papa saying a name that meant nothing to me, holding my brother so tightly against him, as tight as Mama held me. "Sleep, darling." said Mama "We're safe for now." I didn't want to, wanted to stay awake to watch over my brother, watch where we were going, but my eyes became heavy and the last thing I saw was a ship looming out of the mist. My parent's ship, our home on the water..... As I was falling deeper into sleep I heard sis say, "Momma. Who is... Co Ca Coandeer?""Coandor dear." Father and I will tell you both all about him as soon as we set sail.Father looked over at sis, "Good thing we have that amulet. We can see him and we will always be able to be one step away from him."Mother looked up at father, "For now!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tetradite Posted July 31, 2012 Share Posted July 31, 2012 I preferred the plot of Quote Pyramid, but this one has a vastly superior prose style. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ithildin Posted July 31, 2012 Share Posted July 31, 2012 :sleep: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
naomis8329 Posted July 31, 2012 Share Posted July 31, 2012 As I was falling deeper into sleep I heard sis say, "Momma. Who is... Co Ca Coandeer?""Coandor dear." Father and I will tell you both all about him as soon as we set sail.Father looked over at sis, "Good thing we have that amulet. We can see him and we will always be able to be one step away from him."Mother looked up at father, "For now!" Rocking, gentle rocking. Arms around me and I'm snuggled up to someone. I moved as gently as I could not wanting to wake my brother. He'd seen more than me, used more of himself than me, he needed time to recharge himself. He'd not only saved me, he'd saved Momma, Papa, some of our people. He was tired and needed to sleep. I tried to slip from under his arm but he held on tighter. I looked up to see him looking at me. He winked and I elbowed him back. "I thought you were asleep." I said. "You know what I thought did." he replied. "I hate you." I seethed. " I know." he smiled. I couldn't help it I started giggling and he joined in. Now I think it was more than likely shock that had us laughing like loons, then, we needed to just do something normal to prove we were still alive. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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