Fallout Story : Into The Wasteland

[cyrus224]

I'm not usually into Fan fiction in any way, so I can understand some people not being interested, but give it a try, and see what you think.

 

 

I'm writing a short fallout Novel, not like most following a hero in the wasteland. This story follows a young girl raised amongst Raiders, who lead a brutal life of death, violence, murder, rape and other terrible things you see in the wasteland, captured by the enclave for killing someone seemingly important.

 

 

The first 4 chapters are posted so far, updated daily, if anyone wants to check it out!

 

Click Here to check out the story

 

 

I'd love some feedback if you have it,

 

 

Thanks!

 

 

 

[billyro]

I've been busy, but I read the first few pages. Really good so far: it was easy to paint the scene in my head and the characters seem interesting from what I've read. There are a few minor grammatical errors but nothing too serious.

 

Good job. :)

[cyrus224]

I do really hope you continue to read when you are not so busy, I am getting a lot of really positive feedback on other websites (A lot of people saying they couldn't put it down and read it all in one go, which I find awesome, and hope continues)

 

 

Could you point out what grammatical errors you noted as an example? I am writing this at a pretty fast speed, but I am also usually pretty good with grammar, formatting and punctuation, although I do fix quite a few mistakes when I do a quick once over before uploading each part, I'd just like to know if something overly out of place is noticed. (Like word auto-correcting semi colons where I do not want them on occasion)

 

 

Thanks regardless, I hope you keep reading and enjoy it, it's getting quite intense at this point.