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Weapon set based on Wen-M's creations


yanazake

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Hey, great work so far!

Now, let me give some advanced critique, as I like to do to help people improve their creations...

 

 

The first one, named "Silver Sword" by the original artist seems just perfect. It is simple, yet you did a flawless job from what I could see. *paying more attention* Oh wait - The three markings are in the wrong position - they look like "+"s ,while the orkiginals look like "X"s. Tho this is not a real problem - it could be used to give the original artist credit for the weapons, and you did something that LOOKS like it, so if there is no permission to use them, we can make evariations ;3 [i haven't received any word from him yet]

 

I couldn't recognize the sword in the following post:

http://thenexusforums.com/index.php?s=&amp...t&p=1385650

 

The demon sword [suposedly, the one with 4 skulls] needs some improvement. The overall shape is almost there, But the position of the curves need to be fixed~

http://thenexusforums.com/index.php?s=&amp...t&p=1386405

 

This one seems like a custom, because I couldn't recognize it either. It looks pretty interesting too, But I'd say it needs some little tweaks.

http://thenexusforums.com/index.php?s=&amp...t&p=1387557

 

The "Berserker Fang" looks great so far. I'd recommend shortening the holding area a little, or making that protuberant bit closer to the tip of the holding area. [i think it's called hilt...]

http://thenexusforums.com/index.php?s=&amp...t&p=1387860

 

To end it, the dragon head dagger is an interesting idea, but the holding area seems too short. After seeing the black version, I realised the eyes could be smaller. I'm saving the pics to make sketchs for you, and maybe help ya improve it.

For the second one, the texture placement looks good, I can't see any problems in there - good work :3

http://thenexusforums.com/index.php?s=&amp...t&p=1388519

 

now, as an overall, I couldn't notice the sharp area. it didn't seem narrow enought to pass the sharpening impression to me~

 

Remember, I'm trying to help you improve! I admit I don't even have half the hability to make something like these models.

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well ive done alot of work on it the size of the handle should be ok after all this is just a dagger. dont forget to take a step back and ask me what you want me to do here.

these swords are that overly anime its hard to get each curve and bend right im looking backwards and forwards at one picture do you know anyone else who can do that and make something look apparently to everyone else amazing!. its very hard i know your just trying to help but if you tried to make one of these yourself you'll see exactly just how hard it is.

 

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