species5478 Posted March 31, 2010 Share Posted March 31, 2010 Engrossing read...your use of adjectives is done well, too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maharg67 Posted March 31, 2010 Author Share Posted March 31, 2010 Engrossing read...your use of adjectives is done well, too. Thank you, Species5478! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maharg67 Posted April 5, 2010 Author Share Posted April 5, 2010 I hope that this does not annoy people too much but I suggest people start again from the beginning as I think the expanded and altered storyline will turn out to be easier to follow with more Fallout like action. I have added some elements but will remove some to make the plot less complicated. I also intend to improve the story in other ways. Either post here or PM me with any responses. I had to do this as the plot was becoming even too complicated for me. Also I have gained a great deal as a writer from editing and trying to improve this story. Again, I hope you like the changes. PS: there will also be some nice surprises added, I hope. :no: :yes: :wub: :down: :sick: :sleep: :yucky: :ninja: :sweat: :unsure: :turned: :tongue: :verymad: :biggrin: :rolleyes: :confused: :thumbsup: :whistling: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maharg67 Posted April 6, 2010 Author Share Posted April 6, 2010 The story is to be redone with new topic from start using old characters, factions, altered geography as added external to DC Wastelands current in game etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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