Burnagirl Posted September 7, 2010 Share Posted September 7, 2010 Fairy with a gun As the chiming time sounded nineAcross the moonlit village and meadow landsThe ancient winds gathered their strength To once again rend the veil twixt man and sprite And to usher in the fairy queenWho rode the lightning from her mystic realm. For a war had come to the everglades from beyond our worldthis moonlit eve so fair and bright.Aye, twas the darkened king, the very spawn of sin who broke the truce of a thousand years to steal the soul of the queen’s fair love and enslave the throne of her heart.and rend the earth with his awful blight. This is not complete ... I reckon there might be 3 or more stanza's (if that's the right word) still to come. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
delta401 Posted September 7, 2010 Share Posted September 7, 2010 Wow...is a beautiful textCompliments, good work :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keanumoreira Posted September 7, 2010 Share Posted September 7, 2010 Wow...is a beautiful textCompliments, good work :) Agreed. :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
species5478 Posted September 8, 2010 Share Posted September 8, 2010 I hope you finish the next set of stanzas, this was an excellent read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maharg67 Posted September 8, 2010 Share Posted September 8, 2010 I join the chorus and add my congratulations. Very excellent!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gormonk Posted September 8, 2010 Share Posted September 8, 2010 ahh the words how the flow like a beutifull sadness that comes folling death of a beloved well done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SilverDNA Posted September 9, 2010 Share Posted September 9, 2010 Burnagirl, I hope you get the 3 additional stanzas done, because what you already came up is really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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