DirTek Posted May 31, 2009 Share Posted May 31, 2009 Nice poems :x:x Really nice :D Keep on going Dezi...You're a smart girl :whistling: hehe Cheers :thumbsup: Maafiaman Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Malavok Posted June 2, 2009 Share Posted June 2, 2009 You got some great words of passion, indeed. Me likes, methinks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted June 3, 2009 Author Share Posted June 3, 2009 thank you both! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordTenaim Posted June 5, 2009 Share Posted June 5, 2009 Dezdimona, There are few things that penetrate my unfortunately twisted mind but all the poems here are beautiful and gies me hope for the world. Must totally agree with Coolystguy and his comment. please give us some more of these beauties. sam Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted June 5, 2009 Author Share Posted June 5, 2009 thank you and indeed I shall. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragonpen61 Posted June 15, 2009 Share Posted June 15, 2009 Your words are a delight are beautiful are tender are sensuous are rich Thank you for expressing what you feel so openly I can no longer truly love but you, you have hope and you have light thank you again for your words FROM THE HEALER WHO CAN NOT HEAL HIMSELF (as somebody called me once) LEAVING FORUM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maharg67 Posted June 16, 2009 Share Posted June 16, 2009 Beautiful words. thank you, dezdimona! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted June 16, 2009 Author Share Posted June 16, 2009 thank you for enjoying my works! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted July 7, 2009 Author Share Posted July 7, 2009 He walks intothe room,all leather andshiny chains His dark eyesaglow,for he knowshe controls myreins! Slowly does hecaress my skin,a leather collarfor my neck,yes! it isplay time onceagain! He taunts and excites me,brings me tooa peak, He knows my bodily desires,his skill andhandling leave meweak. Passions ebb and passions flow,we two sharea bond thatmany will neverknow! Keeper of mybody,keeper of myheart,my unbridled needfor you,will never keepus apart! The Chronicles of Sticks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gabryal Posted July 7, 2009 Share Posted July 7, 2009 Steeling resolve and finding the strengthhe bears his soul to the suns full lighthaving searched the breadth and lengthof the universe, to find this plight Sacred submission, given freehis strong heart humbled at her trusthe looks down to her upon her kneesand prays he's worthy of her love and lust He scans the room with piercing eyesdaring any to mock her beautiful tollHe wonders "Why can't they realize?"The strength she has to surrender control He sees in her eyes the hope and fearthe pain of those who were unworthyhe brushes her cheek, standing nearand vows to protect her, for all eternity His hands clasp the collar around her neckhe feels the shiver, the pulse in her veinsas he clasps the ends around the backhe vows to protect her from all future pain The black leather leash, he clasps to it's ringrising her up he pulls her into his armshis eyes dare the crowd to do anythingto mar this moment, to raise any alarm They pass between those who are consumed by bigotrywho cannot understand how a slave can be freeHow he chooses to devote his life to her securityand this purest love they refuse to see. They walk away from the whispered words to a place he prepared for them to beaway from the anger and the swordsof words of prejudice, of words of hypocrisy Love so pure, so selfless, so filled with harmonythe world can't accept or understandso for their lack, they lose the companyof those who refuse to bow before the will of the land. ~A Response by Gabryal to Dezdimona's beautiful poem, Love, Chronicles of Sticks~Dedicated to Dezdimona, one of the few pure hearts I've met in my three decades of life Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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