Gabryal Posted July 7, 2009 Share Posted July 7, 2009 i sigh as the questions comerapid-fire, as they always dowhy do i feel this way, theyask - why do i feel this need to be what i am?to swallow the fears even i have?i may be something that theycannot understand, but still i ama girl, a mother, a woman witha heart, a soul that yearsneeding to be fed and fulfilled with savage and gentle touchcalmed and tamed and set free inone whispered word, one commandempowering and enslaving my words fall on deaf ears,they cannot hear me, they donot understand, and don't want to.what do they fear? blindfolded, gagged and boundheld tight by the strictures ofstereotype, of hype and fiction,i cannot say what it is that they see, when they see me, if theycan at all without the eyesthat You employ, looking moredeeply, molding and shaping refinement of what You see asalmost perfection, flawed but wonderful, something to holdto own, to cherish. so i breathe deeply and shrugoff their ignorance, small pityat the things they will neverknow, in their small world. A response from eshva, slave to Gabryal, to Dezdimona's beautiful work Love: Chronicles of Sticks"I love you Dezi" from eshva, relayed by Gabryal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted July 7, 2009 Author Share Posted July 7, 2009 @ gabryal.You make my poetry come to life for many reasons, a true man of many talents. Thank you for the beautiful response @ Eshva:Eshva , mo ibigin , mo willingness , mo pagkakaibigan , mo malaman sino ka ay , gawin ka lahat ang laling marami desireable sa ako! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordTenaim Posted July 8, 2009 Share Posted July 8, 2009 Methinks Dezi is getting more poets outta the closet alas no talent with words have I (apart rom mangaling them). Keep the Beauty and eroticism coming and lighten the world some more. :biggrin: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted July 8, 2009 Author Share Posted July 8, 2009 Methinks Dezi is getting more poets outta the closet alas no talent with words have I (apart rom mangaling them). Keep the Beauty and eroticism coming and lighten the world some more. :biggrin:thank you, you say much of meaning in few words. Not all poetry is rhyme and form.Words spoken from the heart mean oh,so much more! :smile: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maharg67 Posted July 9, 2009 Share Posted July 9, 2009 Dezi, you speak truth and your words are stil wonderful. Zen poetry (or one of its influences) are short statements, each a line that add up as in The heart expressed trulyThe heart is opened just a little moreSome weight is goneOne can move more freely now! I wrote it on the spot so I hope you enjoyed it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted July 9, 2009 Author Share Posted July 9, 2009 very cool *huge grin* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordTenaim Posted July 19, 2009 Share Posted July 19, 2009 To quote the Great Bard "more, more". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted July 19, 2009 Author Share Posted July 19, 2009 *bows*, thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted July 21, 2009 Author Share Posted July 21, 2009 The dinner wasA gourmet’s delight,With romantic music,Low and flickeringCandle light Your Armani suitMy Valvo dress,Walking arm inArm,You give oneBreast a slightCaress I gaze intoYour eyes ofBlue,I smile thatSmile that’s aBeckoning clue. We stop and We kiss,And kiss onceAgain. Your powerful arms,Crush me toYour body onceagain My fingers runThrough your hairOf jet black,Your increased pressureOn the smallOf my back We walk aWays,And stop yetAgain,The gleam inMy eyes asksA single questionWhen? The parting ofLips,A small moanI release,The night isQuiet and soEmpty,Our little worldIs at peace. The kisses becomeEager,And hands startTo roam,A gasp asYour fingers findA warm and Moist home Words of endearmentA hardness asOf bone,Gentle images inYour mind,Tis the endOf my poem! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Netwit2008 Posted July 21, 2009 Share Posted July 21, 2009 I'm SO glad I had a few spare moments to read and take in this smorgasbord of romantic delights! These are true flights of sensual fantasy, a feast of words and images. Thank you for sharing such tender, yet powerful works. The title alone, is so cool and a wonderful thread linking all these chains of emotion together. Excellent job my lady! Your suitors have also spoken poignantly! Just an awesome collection of pieces! :thumbsup: :thanks: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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