Maharg67 Posted November 11, 2009 Share Posted November 11, 2009 beautiful written, Herculine, fairy princess divine The Elves they danced in the silvery moonlight both beautiful and yet fay both elegant and yet sharp perhaps to watch them safely hidden is wise to do but take care not to step too far into the sacred grove The Trickster! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Herculine Posted November 11, 2009 Author Share Posted November 11, 2009 Thanks! I was inspired by an ancient Chinese proverb. I'll add more examples to the list as I think of them... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
species5478 Posted November 11, 2009 Share Posted November 11, 2009 Very Crafty...I just realized how abstract you thinking is becoming. Kudos. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Herculine Posted November 12, 2009 Author Share Posted November 12, 2009 Abstract? I thought my meaning was quite clear... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spiralunix Posted November 12, 2009 Share Posted November 12, 2009 Very nice! I used to write a poem a day and short stories...it was my passion really. I haven't for about three years now but I guess I was pretty good from the reactions i got. The idea of sharing poems in the virtual world is very new and daunting to me lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
species5478 Posted November 12, 2009 Share Posted November 12, 2009 Abstract? I thought my meaning was quite clear... Yes, your poem was very concise. In terms of "abstract thinking", I was actually throwing that reference out there to acknowledge the conversation that we had a few days back. I enjoyed every minute of your philosophy. :cool: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deleted54170User Posted November 12, 2009 Share Posted November 12, 2009 Herculine it is good to see that your thought is flowing a bit more freely. All of us who use our keyboard kind and bound to type confused meaning occasionally still do linger here. Nice to know that you are getting in the know to let your mind flow and ignore the might for fear it might damn your free flow of thoughtful insight about which you have thought and for it you grow a thicker skin from our chagrin. Please remember we are all innocent minds here, trying to find a way that is clear, and gain from each other some insight to merge with our questionable mights. We each are just a part of a sentence some greater form of we are gave birth to and we hope we do find that which completes us someday. So, if you feel a strong pose in your thought that you wish to add to prose do so without pause. Let us then do as we can with it to see if it is for us to decipher. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Herculine Posted November 13, 2009 Author Share Posted November 13, 2009 Thank you Pagafyr. Your unique perspectives and prose are always welcome in this garden. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted November 13, 2009 Share Posted November 13, 2009 With money you can... ...buy a house, but not a home. ...buy a clock, but not time. ...buy a bed, but not peaceful sleep. ...buy a book, but not knowledge. ...pay a doctor, but not buy good health. ...buy a position, but not respect. ...buy blood, but not life. ...hire followers, but not buy friendship. ...buy sex, but not love.and so the reality of life,it's ideals and dreams does unfold. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maharg67 Posted November 20, 2009 Share Posted November 20, 2009 A bumpity poem bump in the night!!! tis the bumpity beast!!! that does bump this topic!!! in hope to see more wondrous poetry!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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