Lisnpuppy Posted September 23, 2008 Share Posted September 23, 2008 She wraps her anger round herLike a many-colored coat.She thinks it will but warm herBut little does she know…That no longer will it protect herIt only makes her lame,Deaf and blind to the caringThat can get her through her pain.Yet I can not make her let it goCan not bring her to the light.Can not make her see the goodWith even second sight.Until then she’ll muddle throughWith the fickle and the fae.And I’ll hold out hope that tomorrowWill bring a warmer day. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gamerbird Posted September 23, 2008 Share Posted September 23, 2008 Beautiful.It has so much meaning that links to me.Thank you for this poem LisnPuppy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
myrmaad Posted September 23, 2008 Share Posted September 23, 2008 Beautiful.It has so much meaning that links to me.Thank you for this poem LisnPuppy. I agree, it's absolutely beautiful, so much heart. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tyreil829 Posted September 23, 2008 Share Posted September 23, 2008 quite well done you put your heart into it, shows in your poem Lisen nice work Sheppard Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted September 24, 2008 Share Posted September 24, 2008 Heart and soulso much to tell,to let her know! Beautiful! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alex2avs Posted September 24, 2008 Share Posted September 24, 2008 Beautiful. :smile: You are very talented :yes: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lisnpuppy Posted September 24, 2008 Author Share Posted September 24, 2008 Thank you everyone for your kind comments. :biggrin: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gamerbird Posted September 26, 2008 Share Posted September 26, 2008 No thank you LisnPuppy for this wonderful poem! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nosisab Posted September 26, 2008 Share Posted September 26, 2008 The Druid's Garden is one of the better sections in this forum. Many in here are worth having their works professionally published, some are better than many published writers over there and most knows already as to lead the reader into seeing and/or feeling what they are describing. I'm a lucky one for being able to know you all, and yet more for being called a friend from LisnPuppy. Thank you my dear friend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lisnpuppy Posted September 28, 2008 Author Share Posted September 28, 2008 The Druid's Garden is one of the better sections in this forum. Many in here are worth having their works professionally published, some are better than many published writers over there and most knows already as to lead the reader into seeing and/or feeling what they are describing. I'm a lucky one for being able to know you all, and yet more for being called a friend from LisnPuppy. Thank you my dear friend. I am thankful you are my friend also! I am grateful for your encouragement and always kind words! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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