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Ok...how about a candle's flame?

He does now; I'm one of the people who encouraged him to post in the Garden. :happy: OH...so you scout talent too?Are you Fifoo's manager? LOL...

Gosh...I give up! What?

Hehe...yeah, that's right! You're good...

Question: "At night they come without being fetched, and by day they are lost without being stolen."

Fifoo...I didn't know you could write!

Our existence is such a strange thing when you think about it. What are we really?

I didn't expect the near nude female scenes...this was a very abstract piece, whose oddities kinda reminds me of Aeon Flux.

@Keanumoreira I love reading your work, and comments. I hope you keep reading and writing. @ Maharg Thanks for the comment. I've aced all of my classes EXCEPT for my writing class. Even though I did all of my homework, and recieved excellent comments from the professor, she still gave me a 83.5. I asked how this was possible because I should have received an A, and she raised it to a 85.6 instead...:blink: @Silver DNA I'm glad you enjoyed it. You're work is wonderful too. I'm inept at poetry, but love to read it. My previous short story dealt with characters who were tormented in one form or another. There was no humor. They lived dark lives and instead of retelling a similar tale, I decided to give this story a greater variety of emotional content. @ Rheyne Hehe...yeah, gold is my Achilles heel too. I like mine in the form of earrings and rings though. I generally try to post a new chapter every week. I don't really have time for more. I hope you seed the garden with more poems. They cause ideas to sprout in one's mind.

@ Pyrosocial Any idea who wrote it?

Answer: Ask each twin, "Which path would your brother take?". Why? Let's say the correct path is on the left side. You asked the liar, "What would your brother say?" Well, the liar would know his brother was honest and he would say the left side, but since the liar lies, he would say right. If you asked the honest twin the same question, he would say right, because he knows his brother will lie. Therefore, you would know that the correct path was the left...

"Nobody gives that much away with out wanting something for it." The young Sister Compassionate responded. "So, want do you really want?" - Maharg Isn't it true that people always want someone from one another? Even if it's to be left alone...

A sheering sound of creaking, which proceeded to ring into our ears, vibrated throughout the story; the ceiling began to crumble. The skyscraper was imploding. - Keanumoreira Very descriptive. And the playful relationship between characters was a pleasant touch.

Question: You walk up to a mountain that has two paths. One leads to the other side of the mountain, and the other will get you lost forever. You meet two twins who know the path that leads to the other side. You can ask each twin only one question. The problem? One always lies and one always tells the truth, and you don't know which is which. What do you ask to find the path?

"I gazed at the reflection in my mind..." -SilverDNA How eloquent.

Some call insanity a form of genius.

Very touching. This is the heart of a poet.

What a magnetic piece...I read it, and was drawn back for a second read.

Short and sweet...