Anabaxis Posted December 3, 2011 Share Posted December 3, 2011 To me, I feel it is the ultimate way of expressing depth and beauty. Poetry is the most perfectly expressive art. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordWushin Posted December 5, 2011 Author Share Posted December 5, 2011 I like it a lot. It has the emotions and knowledge you possess. I would love to read more. Tokyo, you did an awesome job as well. And Maharg, I do love the poem was true to me yesterday! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anabaxis Posted December 5, 2011 Share Posted December 5, 2011 Here is another poem of mine. It is called "Signed, The Leviathan". Same idea as "Signed, The Hydra", but instead of a comedy, it is a tragedy. The life of the Leviathan is happy and peaceful for a long time, before, in the fires of industry, its home is destroyed. The Leviathan wanders for many centuries, sustaining its life with the rain from Heaven and the food found on cargo ships that it must destroy to live. At one point, the guilt of killing just to survive so greatly overwhelms the Leviathan, it stops eating and dies of starvation, in what it believes is the most merciful and loving thing it ever did: to die. Like the Hydra, the Leviathan is pious and holy, and it very often prays to God that its situation may be helped. At one point, for its suicidal gesture of starvation, it is sent to Hell. It describes the pain and agony and torment of Hell, yet says to God it will still forever praise his name. It cries in sadness, for it knows that it is separated from God forever, and it can never be saved, but is the victim of a cruel life of unending torture. Despite the fact that its voice is never to be heard by God again because of the separation, saddening to both, the Leviathan continues praising for eternity the name of God. Eventually, the Leviathan is so bruised and broken from Hell's onslaught, it no longer can move, and it can no longer speak. As it is scorched by raining fires forever and buried in burning sand, it still offers its own thoughts as eternal praise for the Lord, as it becomes a forgotten relic to all, and it fades into obscurity, lifeless and cold, an eternal monument to a life of pain and agony, the victim of a nightmare that could never be saved. So, without further ado... -------------------------------------------- CXXVIII. Signed, The Leviathan Hear the tale of mine, my pitiful cry, for lost to me is the way of the worldNever had I done that justifying the hate gestured to me by the world of menFor I lie a vagabond amongst the relicted waters, a cold and alone nomad of the watersTaken was my home by the fires and the metals and machines, until naught was leftYet never did I gesture such hatred back to them, for this is not the way of the Lord I wander the oceans, a slow and quiet cry emanating from my lips, a dirge of sorrowAm I to forever to slither acrost the waves, that I am unloved and unmourned, out of man's hatred?As the ships roll past me, the sailors are so paralyzed in fear that they do not even notice the tears that flow down my cheekAm I truly to be marked as a cursed beast, a vile monster, a daemon to be gutted and hung by hooks, with as much as I have been wronged?Yet still I remain in the way of the Lord, for I do right by my Father despite my scars I have no place to go, no plan to call home, for I am hunted, I am hated, I am seen as worthy of damnationBut no beings deserve this pain, not even my torturers, for though none deserve grace, all are given it, as all deserve mercyO Lord, take this thorn, let me slip away from this pain, let me so slowly close my eyes as I pass away in the nightLet my soul gently drift to heaven, and heal my scars, for centuries are as days to me, for a dragon is forever as am IYet I wait, because shining through the gleam of the waters lies the rays of hope that I am ordained for by God As I slough through the solemn cold, and I shiver in the icy cold of this rainy night, further I hold my headFor the mercy of the Lord sates my thirst by the waters of the heavens, and my pangs soothed by the manna belowGnaw must I on the grasses of the Abyss, and ravage the boats that I may preserve myself in this miserable lifeEven so, I weep for my victims, and bury even the inhumane in honour, in vigil and respect for the lostYet guilt takes me, that I must kill for sustenance, that I must take lives in selfish interests So I ask, for all the darkness I have faced, the cold nights and the winters I live alone, to pass away into wherever, Lord, you may see me fit to goBy either your hand or mine, take from me this cup of poison and fire, O Lord of mercy and love, for I can no longer bear this painAs the night closes, I shall slowly close my eyes, and let my last breath be, for no more shall die for the sake of keeping me, a wretch, here stillAnd I die, an unloved wretch, never cared for, that could never do anything but harm, and I shall go into the void, for I will not let another dieYet none of this was my plan, O cruel fate, that I all wanted to love, and to be loved, but the rain never ended, and my last gesture of my love was dying So, do not cry for me, for long ago was I lost, and long ago did I see no further reason to live, and saddened am I that nothing could save my soulBut hear me, Lord, for although I may not be heard in the fires of Hell, know I will love you forever more, and will forever give my voice to praise youLet all Inferno be filled with my praises, Lord, let even those who hurt me know I died as a sacrifice of love, in act of MercyI am sorry, and though I shall descend to the murky depths of Hell, and my being shall be consumed by blood and boiling waters of tumult, praise beYet, hear my cries, O dear Lord, for I shall deliver my final dirge, the requiem of a life so deeply lost in an unforgiving nightmare as this For yea, though I shall be chained to the fiery crags of the Nether Lands, I shall cry forth in pain for my lips shalt struggle to praiseFor I, a mere churl in the darkness, shall be the lone wisp of light shining in a cesspool of darkness, driven by the maddened dogs about meI weep, for you shall never be with me so again, and I shall never see the light one more time, but I will shout in praise even though you hear me notHow cruel and ironic, that I, being who lived a holy life and died in grace to man, shall be the voice of reason amongst the poisoned caitiffs of HellYet now I speak further, Lord, as I am now in the chains of this rotted Hell, this graceless fire, this consummate ruination to my very soul, of love For I stand, a beaten and broken beast, tugging and gnawing at yoke and rope that hold me so solemnly in this place, as I sing forth of this great loveI am erect, as a monument to suffering and agony, a bitter remnant of the life I had devoid of hope and love, a nightmare that could never be healedI roar out as the whips of daemons to so sear my flesh, O gracious Lord, that as I shriek in horrible cries of terror, my voice shall ring out praiseFor I may be gone, and you no longer hear the words I speak, wisps of glass to fall on deaf ears, but I will never cease my unending love for youYet time tries still to raze my voice, but never shall daemon take my tongue, nor the Dragon take my voice as so he has tried to take my soul Glory, glory, I cry out to wherever I may so believe lies heaven, as all that sate my thirst be the raining blood from the sanguine skiesBroken and fissured my body, ripped apart is my hide, but still I speak of love and mercy in a land of charred corpses and brimstone rainsSo many shall forever curse your name, but not I, your servant in life and eternal death, and I hold no bitter way for this cup that I holdFor bred of my own mercy and love I earned from your ways, did I so cast my life to this dank and frigid hell, so in love did I damn my own lifeYet further still shall I speak, screaming from my utter and bitter torture, of a way of love immutable, from misery that cannot feel amelioration Dark and cold are the wisps of acid that burn upon my flesh, as so have I crawled acrost this endless desolation, my aegis worn and shatteredAnd though the shackles, chains, and the thorns birthed of my flesh have so built the torture of ten thousand aeons, so hold I still to youI grow weary, and so shall soon fade my voice into the darkness of the Abyss, and remain I a symbol of love, torture, pain, and praise for youHoly shell am I, an angel in damnation, fallen and so bitter, to endlessly stay now, weathered by the wind and the rain, forgotten by the worldYet eternal, shall I remain an unending sign of love in desolation, vapid husk of a life of sorrowful pain, victim of a nightmare that could never be saved Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keanumoreira Posted December 6, 2011 Share Posted December 6, 2011 Fantastic! Wow, you've got yourself a triumphant talent right there. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maharg67 Posted December 6, 2011 Share Posted December 6, 2011 (edited) KILLED A DEMON One day I was attacked by a demonWith out provocationIn a brutal fashionReacting in rageI killed the demonI will for ever be sad for the demonand sorry that I chose to kill it A Zen style poem GGP Edited December 6, 2011 by Maharg67 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordWushin Posted December 6, 2011 Author Share Posted December 6, 2011 Oh I do love that one Maharg. Anabaxis that was an exceptional piece, Bravo Zulu and Kudos! To My Girl When it comes to lovin' couples, don't we make the perfect pair- There's romance, love, and laughter in the friendship that we share. We care enough to listen, to trust and understand. To build a life together, side by side and hand in hand. We both know that we're lucky and we've got a good thing going. Through ups and downs and give and take, our love just keeps on growing... 'Cause I bring out the best in you, and you the best in me- I guess it takes the two of us to make the perfect "we." - Author Unknown - Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordWushin Posted December 14, 2011 Author Share Posted December 14, 2011 There's a special place in my heart that only you can touch -a place where I can go and feel you near.Throughout the day I think of you.I see your smile, hear your voice and in my thoughts you lovingly appear.The way we love each other makes it hard to be apartso when I can't hold you in my arms, I hold you in my heart. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordWushin Posted December 16, 2011 Author Share Posted December 16, 2011 Only once in a lifetime does one live to loveAnother person so fair to beholdBeyond the words any can say or put to musicThe joy of you with me is too greatWords pause on the lips and fall to the groundI stumble to know what to do oftenAction change soon show the difference you makeAs one who is enamored by the beautyNow forever it seems we will be together alwaysYet I would have it no other way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordWushin Posted December 16, 2011 Author Share Posted December 16, 2011 P.S. - I have thought about starting a story topic thread about my character in Skyrim from the beginning. I will write what happened and what he/she does whenever I play and remember to write. It will be in the form of a novel or story. Not quite like a journal, tho that is close to what it will be. I would love to get input about this. Would you like to have it, tho I am not that great with words like this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordWushin Posted December 26, 2011 Author Share Posted December 26, 2011 In this night sky I seeMany stars and dreamsWonderful, beautiful, and wild In this forest dense with treesI hearing and smell is refreshedSunlight's dancing off the water Now on the peak of the mountainFeeling as a bird or astronautSee the world in its splendor But none have been so inspiringAs the sight and sound of my loverI will never see beauty the same again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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