Lisnpuppy Posted August 18, 2008 Share Posted August 18, 2008 I close my eyes to dreamand feel the heat of my desire.I reach, caress your skin, your lipsyour touch to take me higher. I long to hear your voice againif only in my sleep.I wish to stop the endless coldthat covers me so deep. I dream of how your soft lips tasteI long only for your touch.To once again hear whispered wordsthat once meant oh so much. I can only wish the darkness endsfor me to see your face.To lay my head and hear your heartThe pieces back in place. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted August 18, 2008 Share Posted August 18, 2008 very nice, very nice indeed! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nosisab Posted August 18, 2008 Share Posted August 18, 2008 As aways I love your poems, my dear child. They ever sounds so sincere. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
etholas Posted August 21, 2008 Share Posted August 21, 2008 Beautiful poem Lisnpuppy. Touching. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lisnpuppy Posted August 21, 2008 Author Share Posted August 21, 2008 Thank you to everyone with you kind words. I appreciate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chesto Posted September 8, 2008 Share Posted September 8, 2008 A happy ending would only spoil it. What price, art? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blacksnake89 Posted September 8, 2008 Share Posted September 8, 2008 Very well written Lis, it is a beautifully well composed work worthy of gracing one of the several poetry books I've read. My hat...err beanie is off to you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lisnpuppy Posted September 9, 2008 Author Share Posted September 9, 2008 Thank you Blacksnake. Very sweet of you.And that goodness that life does not always imitate art..:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chesto Posted September 9, 2008 Share Posted September 9, 2008 Amen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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