Herculine
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Ban Ancient Aeon for having "Aeon" in his name because Aeon Flux is my all-time favorite animated series.
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You know, Rob, if you really want to post it but worry about banning, you could e-mail a copy to me, let me sprinkle some magic little fairy dust on it and then see how you feel about it.
Perhaps I shall then. I'll send what I have written so far, it's not much.
Two hearts and two machines,Two lovers with separate screens.
Electric links fill the space
So we may talk as face to face.
We share photos, clothed and not,
To make each other feel so hot.
A mouse it clicks, and then another;
Over keyboards fingers flutter.
Pulses race and fluids flow,
Passion in a monitor's glow.
Ecstasy found through the net
To reach a climax I'll not forget.
I'll yearn for more till next we link,
And of your pic is all I'll think.
You've won my heart, my cyber-lover,
And in your place I'll put no other.
Absolutely amazing artistry my dear. Your penmanship is exquisite, and highly arousing if I may be so honest. *wink*
And see? Not a single "dirty" word!
I'm utterly speechless... I've fallen madly in love with your writing and poetry. You deserve much more than the single kudos I gave you from before (unfortunately Dark0ne allows only one to be given per member...)
I am but a modest bard, a lttle fairy with quil and parchment and passion as my ink. Surely I don't deserve such praise, but it does not go without thanks. I am humbled most by the praise of my new friends. Thank you deply.
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Fine...
Girl gamers are way lots betterer than everybody elses in the hole wide world!
There... back on topic now!
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You know, Rob, if you really want to post it but worry about banning, you could e-mail a copy to me, let me sprinkle some magic little fairy dust on it and then see how you feel about it.
Perhaps I shall then. I'll send what I have written so far, it's not much.
Two hearts and two machines,Two lovers with separate screens.
Electric links fill the space
So we may talk as face to face.
We share photos, clothed and not,
To make each other feel so hot.
A mouse it clicks, and then another;
Over keyboards fingers flutter.
Pulses race and fluids flow,
Passion in a monitor's glow.
Ecstasy found through the net
To reach a climax I'll not forget.
I'll yearn for more till next we link,
And of your pic is all I'll think.
You've won my heart, my cyber-lover,
And in your place I'll put no other.
Absolutely amazing artistry my dear. Your penmanship is exquisite, and highly arousing if I may be so honest. *wink*
And see? Not a single "dirty" word!
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Dezi, he might just be the one I'd fight you for!
But then, something can be said for sharing as well...
O.O Oh my... There's no need for fighting girls. Especially over me... I'm sure we can work something out...indeed sister,there is! :whistling::woot: A "game" party is starting! Girls vs Boys! But two against one... No chances for us on the paper boys... But with "positive focussing"... Let me coach you my friend! (Lol) :biggrin:
I welcome your insight my friend - I still have a lot to learn, I'm just a kid for crying out loud. :S
The deal is not to win, but to play the best we can... with esteem... and fun!
And we love to play! (This is still about video games, right?)
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You\'re quite welcome Fifoo. The story is actually much longer than this, but at this point it is far more explicit than the forum rules would allow... If I can manage to tone it down then I shall post more. Until then... You\'ll have to make up your own story. *shrugs*
A good suggestion as well.
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Two hearts and two machines,
Two lovers with separate screens.
Electric links fill the space
So we may talk as face to face.
We share photos, clothed and not,
To make each other feel so hot.
A mouse it clicks, and then another;
Over keyboards fingers flutter.
Pulses race and fluids flow,
Passion in a monitor's glow.
Ecstasy found through the net
To reach a climax I'll not forget.
I'll yearn for more till next we link,
And of your pic is all I'll think.
You've won my heart, my cyber-lover,
And in your place I'll put no other.
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20 years old? By Oblivion's timescale you're ancient! Try to enjoy it despite the arthritis!
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Are you replying to the members who do comment on your stories? And thanking them for it, even if their comments are not what you want to hear? Are you trying to adapt based on the positive feedback you get?
There are many sites dedicated to different types of stories, don't be afraid to post on more than one, and don't be discouraged by negative feedback. there are trolls on every site. Creative writing keeps your brain sharp and is always helpful to you, even if no one reads it.
Well said, Master Librarian!
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If I can manage to tone it down then I shall post more. Until then... You'll have to make up your own story. *shrugs*
:blink: reminds me I have one in the oven (I made a promise to a Little Fairy)... I would be very happy to see more of yours.
Pretty and petite magical creatures can be very patient as they live for hundreds of years, or so it's said. Please take your time, my friend, and I will wait by a mushroom. I know the world outside this realm can often be demanding. Besides, it's been a slight while since I've planted something of my own in my own garden. I've found some seeds, though...
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You know, Rob, if you really want to post it but worry about banning, you could e-mail a copy to me, let me sprinkle some magic little fairy dust on it and then see how you feel about it.
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More descriptive narrative and less choppy dialogue would really make this come alive to the readers. You're off to a good start.
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a man with aheart and not ashamed to hide his feelings.Thats a man... are you taken by any chance? :whistling:
*blush* I have feelings like everyone else, why hide them from people?
And to answer your question... well, um... yes and no.
Dezi, he might just be the one I'd fight you for!
But then, something can be said for sharing as well...
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Don't stop posting your stories! Don't get discouraged by lack of visitors to your thread!
Sometimes I have time to stop and read a bit but it might take me a day or two to have time to leave an intelligent feedback as opposed to "gee, nice work". I can't speak for anyone but myself, but since I've started posting here I've just found so many different threads to watch that I just can't be everywhere all the time. Keep writing, just as I do. Some of my poems only get one or two comments from friends I've made here. I'll still write and if others do or don't comment at least I've expressed myself just the same.
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Weird stuff but still oh so cool. I'm still loving this story!
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Well said, Rob. You're a true gamer!
Since I started this topic I just wanted to take a quick second to thank EVERYONE for participating and expressing their opinions here.
:thanks:
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The boy isn't at all what he appears to be, is he?
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You continue to impress me, and that's not something easily done.
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Something was wrong indeed!
I'm keeping my eye on this one...
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What did you see?
You know, it's possible in a narrative to describe these scenes without using any at all vulgar slang or otherwise objectionable language.
Give it a try on a notepad and see how it goes...
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Are you into punk/emo/goth/hXc women...? Because she likes blood, gore, zombies, ghosts, vampires, and everything macabre... >_>''
There's an Emo Girl hidden inside me. She just doesn't like people to see her.
Aww, well, she doesn't need to be afraid - people here don't judge, and if they do, she can count on me to protect her. You have my word.
BTW, I can't post much more than this, as my story isn't really fit for this forum (hence the warning I gave).
If it stays on the romantic and erotic side and off of the filthy porno get yourself banned side, it's welcome in The Little Fairy's Flower Garden.
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Oblivian Face Exchange Lite is the program I always used before I had Wrye Bash.
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Are you into punk/emo/goth/hXc women...? Because she likes blood, gore, zombies, ghosts, vampires, and everything macabre... >_>''
There's an Emo Girl hidden inside me. She just doesn't like people to see her.
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